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I have now wrote out my script as a first draft and handed it in, I then had feedback from it a few weeks later..
The changes I have made to my script are:

1. I had to get rid of the swearing that was in there because it didnt sound right because the charecters in my script are really different.
2. I then changed a few scenes in my script:

The scene where they discover the fireplace glowing green, I have changed that to Josh wakes up because he heard a noise coming from the kitchen, so he goes to find out what it is and theres a caveman in the kitchen. I have changed the scene because I wanted to show a different part of the time machine, like a time portal has opened up in another dimension and they have enede up in their kitchen.